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Joy
03-11-2002, 01:28 AM
Wandering, but not Lost
Protecting from Death's Frost.
Day, Night, we walk alone
Till all evil is gone.

Sons of Kings and of Men
We search valley and fen.
While all the world sleeps
We stride throughout the deeps.

Lyliac
03-11-2002, 04:33 PM
thats really good

Rohirrim
03-11-2002, 04:33 PM
Itīs Very Good

Raefindel
03-11-2002, 07:16 PM
That one is good, too, Joy. smilies/smile.gif

Gabo Darvas
03-12-2002, 03:00 AM
The Joy of reading. smilies/smile.gif

This poem is about one silent moment of the rangers:

Forests in twilit clothes
Flames dancing in my eyes
Precious birds of evening
Say nothing to be wise.

My soul is flying away
By ancient wings of dreams
Telling silent tales of
Our lives' secret streams.

[ March 12, 2002: Message edited by: Gabo Darvas ]

littlemanpoet
03-12-2002, 05:31 AM
Wow, Gabo! I like it!

Joy
03-12-2002, 01:09 PM
Excellent job Gabo! Keep it up.

Luineglin
03-12-2002, 04:30 PM
i like them both they really get across alot of feeling