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Joy 03-11-2002 01:28 AM

Wandering - Poem for the Rangers
 
Wandering, but not Lost
Protecting from Death's Frost.
Day, Night, we walk alone
Till all evil is gone.

Sons of Kings and of Men
We search valley and fen.
While all the world sleeps
We stride throughout the deeps.

Lyliac 03-11-2002 04:33 PM

thats really good

Rohirrim 03-11-2002 04:33 PM

Itīs Very Good

Raefindel 03-11-2002 07:16 PM

That one is good, too, Joy. [img]smilies/smile.gif[/img]

Gabo Darvas 03-12-2002 03:00 AM

The Joy of reading. [img]smilies/smile.gif[/img]

This poem is about one silent moment of the rangers:

Forests in twilit clothes
Flames dancing in my eyes
Precious birds of evening
Say nothing to be wise.

My soul is flying away
By ancient wings of dreams
Telling silent tales of
Our lives' secret streams.

[ March 12, 2002: Message edited by: Gabo Darvas ]

littlemanpoet 03-12-2002 05:31 AM

Wow, Gabo! I like it!

Joy 03-12-2002 01:09 PM

Excellent job Gabo! Keep it up.

Luineglin 03-12-2002 04:30 PM

i like them both they really get across alot of feeling


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