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Morgoth Bauglir 08-15-2002 03:35 PM

I made a poem!!!!!
 
i couldnt find the poem thread in books soo...

this may not be that great but i thought i had to post it, i couldnt sleep last night it was really wierd

on a quest
hung by a string
they try their best
to destroy this thing

more powerful than all
lovely to behold
this thing is very small
a menace of old

woo hoo! oohh how bout this!?

if u can, keep on adding on to the poem,and we will make a long continuous poem.

anyway i hope u like it lol

Arwen Imladris 08-15-2002 04:37 PM

Hey! That is pretty good! The only thing that I would do different is say the ring instead of this thing. Keep going! [img]smilies/smile.gif[/img]

Tigerlily Gamgee 08-15-2002 04:53 PM

OK, here's a shot at a continuation...

On through the dark
With evil near
They wait for any
Hope to appear

Four friends they are
Nine they become
The Fellowship created
The journey begun

Eruwen 08-17-2002 05:58 PM

He he!! That is cool. And Tigerlily, that is very deep. But I might try at this. {I just started writing poems last year, and I'm working on my creativity.}

The road was long
The journey cold
But the evil helps
Their friendship to hold

With the loss of two
The Fellowhip breaks
And the trip to Mordor
Only two take

With darkness ahead
And home behind
They go on to battle
Of every which kind

The evil grows
And the terror awaits
As with a new companion
They arrive at the gates

That is all I have. I have to go eat dinner. I'm not too good. But I did my best.


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