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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum Yesterday, 11:46 PM
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Posted By ArcusCalion
Silmaril The War of the Ring

This is the first draft of the chapter The War of the Ring.

This chapter is a thoroughly mixed bag of sources, and so there is no base text. Because of this, I have marked every instance of any...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum Yesterday, 04:48 PM
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Posted By ArcusCalion
FY-HL-16.5/21: Agreed, this makes sense. ...

FY-HL-16.5/21: Agreed, this makes sense.

FY-HL-17.5: Yeah this is a small matter, we don't need to spend time on it. We are essentially in enough agreement to move forward.

I must say, the...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-18-2018, 07:30 PM
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Posted By ArcusCalion
Some good notes Fin! Sorry I was confused. ...

Some good notes Fin! Sorry I was confused.

RSO-SL-01, RSO-SL-01.5, and TS-SL-14: I am glad you agree to the shift, and now that I know that the title has a Tolkien source, I agree to use it, but I...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-17-2018, 03:18 PM
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Posted By ArcusCalion
I just had an idea: What if from RSO-SL-22...

I just had an idea: What if from RSO-SL-22 through to just before the Battle of the Pelennor Fields could be its own chapter called The Treason of Isengard, since the vast bulk of the chapter will be...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-17-2018, 03:02 PM
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Posted By ArcusCalion
Thank you for the kudos Fin, much appreciated. ...

Thank you for the kudos Fin, much appreciated.

I must admit I am somewhat confused by your structuring changes. This is how it seems to me that you wish to have the last chapters laid out:

I...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-15-2018, 10:08 AM
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Posted By ArcusCalion
FY-HL-04.5: Indeed. RS-SL-30.97: If you...

FY-HL-04.5: Indeed.

RS-SL-30.97: If you think so, then I will leave it.
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-15-2018, 10:05 AM
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Posted By ArcusCalion
Agreed

Agreed
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-15-2018, 10:04 AM
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Posted By ArcusCalion
Agreed to the editing change, and I await your...

Agreed to the editing change, and I await your restructuring proposal.
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-14-2018, 12:27 AM
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Posted By ArcusCalion
In my quest to add in the rest of the LotR...

In my quest to add in the rest of the LotR prologue, the bulk of usable material in Concerning Hobbits should go in this chapter. Here is how I lay it out.

I made a slight restructuring change....
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-14-2018, 12:14 AM
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Posted By ArcusCalion
I have tried to add in the text of the Prologue...

I have tried to add in the text of the Prologue to the work. Here I have placed Of the Ordering of the Shire. To do this in the best way, I had to do some mild restructuring.

I took out NKD-SL-06,...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-14-2018, 12:04 AM
Replies: 6
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Posted By ArcusCalion
After we decided to add in the bits from the...

After we decided to add in the bits from the Prologue to LotR about the Finding of the Ring, I think we should take as much of the Prologue as possible. Therefore I have tried to find the best places...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-13-2018, 11:59 PM
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Posted By ArcusCalion
Sorry to triple post, but I found this addition...

Sorry to triple post, but I found this addition for the chapter only just now. Right after HR-SL-11 finishes and the part I removed (HR-SL-12) begins, I propose we add this in given in A Reader's...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-13-2018, 09:08 PM
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Posted By ArcusCalion
Silmaril The Ring Sets Out

This is the first draft of the chapter The Ring Sets Out.

This chapter uses a thoroughly mixed bag of sources, so I mark every addition made to the text.

The markings are:
FY-HL-xx for all the...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-13-2018, 08:22 PM
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Posted By ArcusCalion
Actually, reviewing the draft for the next...

Actually, reviewing the draft for the next chapter, I think it is best to take the entire addition of HR-SL-15 through the end of HR-SL-15.4 and move it to the next chapter. It fits into that draft...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-13-2018, 06:50 PM
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Posted By ArcusCalion
I agree with everything except HR-SL-15.4 for two...

I agree with everything except HR-SL-15.4 for two reasons. The first and smaller one is that there remain a good many verbs that are in the present tense, when they should be in past tense, which I...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-13-2018, 01:19 PM
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Posted By ArcusCalion
nice, looks good, some good tidbits!

nice, looks good, some good tidbits!
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-11-2018, 10:47 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 103
Posted By ArcusCalion
Silmaril The Hunt for the Ring

This is the first draft of the chapter The Hunt for the Ring.

This chapter uses the text of The Hunt for the Ring from UT as a base text, and I mark the first instance of the main text. In UT,...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-11-2018, 09:45 PM
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Posted By ArcusCalion
Now that we have finished step 1) and 2) of our...

Now that we have finished step 1) and 2) of our to-do list, we come to step 3). I am pretty much resolved to use the Synopsis of LotR at this point, as I think it is a fairly safe assumption that...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-11-2018, 08:30 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 214
Posted By ArcusCalion
3) I agree to the use of the '*****' as an...

3) I agree to the use of the '*****' as an editorial distinction, as I think it is enough. I as well agree with keeping Of the Finding of the Ring as a subheading. As to The Broken Bridge see below....
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-11-2018, 12:58 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 214
Posted By ArcusCalion
Everything to which I do not respond (and...

Everything to which I do not respond (and everything not mentioned in the previous post) I agree to.

TS-QE-03: I agree to this addition here, but I would edit it differently, as your version does...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-10-2018, 06:22 PM
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Posted By ArcusCalion
As this post is very very long, I think I will...

As this post is very very long, I think I will first make some general responses:

1) First thing first: WOW! This is an incredibly skillful and labor-intensive draft, and I must congratulate you,...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-09-2018, 09:29 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 214
Posted By ArcusCalion
This is the first draft of the chapter Of the...

This is the first draft of the chapter Of the Finding of the Ring.

This chapter uses a thoroughly mixed bag of sources, so I mark every addition made to the text.

The markings are:
FY-HL-xx...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-09-2018, 09:05 PM
Replies: 189
Views: 32,994
Posted By ArcusCalion
1) I have posted a draft of my restructured...

1) I have posted a draft of my restructured chapter including Of the Finding of the Ring in The Stewards thread. In that thread we can begin to discuss the inclusion of The Quest for Erebor into that...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-09-2018, 08:43 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 214
Posted By ArcusCalion
TS-AA-02b: I agree, and I prefer the second...

TS-AA-02b: I agree, and I prefer the second option, with the Chieftain of the Dunedain info.

TS-SL-03/04: In the next post I will give my restructured form of this chapter, where these changes...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-09-2018, 01:44 PM
Replies: 189
Views: 32,994
Posted By ArcusCalion
Having reviewed the Synopsis in LotR, if we can...

Having reviewed the Synopsis in LotR, if we can prove it was written by Tolkien and not his editor, it is indeed perfect for our desires. With the synopsis, we can include at least the Hunt for the...
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