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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-20-2018, 06:40 PM
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Posted By Findegil
FY-HL-21: In the way the events are arranged...

FY-HL-21: In the way the events are arranged here, I would not use this title at all. Where does this sub-chapter end?
We could consider to arrange the story differently and start with telling about...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-19-2018, 04:21 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 98
Posted By Findegil
RSO-SL-01, RSO-SL-01.5 and TS-SL-14: I am also...

RSO-SL-01, RSO-SL-01.5 and TS-SL-14: I am also okay with keeping these together under a sub-heading within The Tale of Aragorn and Arwen.

FY-HL-16.5 and FY-HL-21: I can understand your desire to...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-18-2018, 05:10 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 98
Posted By Findegil
Sorry for being not clear enough. I mentioned the...

Sorry for being not clear enough. I mentioned the possibility of using The War of the Ring as overall title just as OPTION.
I fully agree to keep The War of the Ring as title for the next chapter!
...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-17-2018, 01:33 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 98
Posted By Findegil
First of all: ArcusCalion I appreciate the hard...

First of all: ArcusCalion I appreciate the hard work you put into this chaper very much. It is really nicely edited even so I have a few points of critisem, the overall feedback I would like to give...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-15-2018, 08:41 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 120
Posted By Findegil
HR-SL-11.5: Godd find! I agree, so I think we...

HR-SL-11.5: Godd find! I agree, so I think we should edit it in on place a bit different:

To the issue with the structure I will come back, when I have analysed the next chapter in more detail.
...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-15-2018, 08:02 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 238
Posted By Findegil
Agreed, very nicely integrated. Respectfully...

Agreed, very nicely integrated.

Respectfully
Findegil
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-15-2018, 07:54 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 153
Posted By Findegil
NKD-SL-06b: I agree to the movement, but we have...

NKD-SL-06b: I agree to the movement, but we have to take care about the editing marks. In its original palce this was the 1. paragraph of a longer part of Appendix A and it was already marked with a...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-15-2018, 07:20 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 287
Posted By Findegil
FY-HL-04.5: This is supposed to be a sup-chapter...

FY-HL-04.5: This is supposed to be a sup-chapter title, right?

RS-SL-30.97: We do not wrigth in-univers texts. We even left in references to modern english. So I think this can stand.

With all...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-13-2018, 05:21 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 120
Posted By Findegil
I have few remarks about this chapter. Everything...

I have few remarks about this chapter. Everything I don’t comment on I agree to.

HR-SL-02: The addition itself is okay but after it I think we should change the following:

A tipo found here...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-13-2018, 01:04 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 224
Posted By Findegil
Sorry for not providing these changes at once...

Sorry for not providing these changes at once with my draft, but I was hesitating about them until I had posted the draft:

Respectfully
Findegil
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-11-2018, 06:22 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 224
Posted By Findegil
1) Thank you for the flowers, I am not sure they...

1) Thank you for the flowers, I am not sure they are warranted.

2) Okay.

3) Oaky we leave A Well-Planned Party out and if we are done with the discussion about the corresponding content we can...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-10-2018, 04:42 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 224
Posted By Findegil
Okay, I agree to the changes so far. The chapter...

Okay, I agree to the changes so far. The chapter The Tale of Agarorn and Arwen looks fine for me. What follows is my draft for the inclusion of the The Quest to Erebor material. I will give it in...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-09-2018, 04:55 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 224
Posted By Findegil
Some comments on the changes, not considering the...

Some comments on the changes, not considering the recasting discussed in the Outline thread:
TS-AA-02: The reference to Aragorn as king seems out of place. We change it thus: Or we might use another...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-09-2018, 04:53 PM
Replies: 189
Views: 33,033
Posted By Findegil
Sorry this is a kind of cross posting since I...

Sorry this is a kind of cross posting since I started this before ArcusCalions laast message.
1) For the inclusion of Of the Finding of the Ring and The Quest for Erebor with some extract from the...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-05-2018, 09:16 AM
Replies: 189
Views: 33,033
Posted By Findegil
I expected that in these parts we would come to...

I expected that in these parts we would come to discussions about the Appendices. I must say that I was from the start reluctant about using material as Appendices. I could agree to ArcusCalion’s...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-03-2018, 10:54 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 146
Posted By Findegil
Agreed. But I would not remove ‘and urged that...

Agreed. But I would not remove ‘and urged that contrary to Gandalf's advice Dol Guldur should not yet be molested’. It is a repetition but since we now describe the scene in retrospect, it makes the...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 07-01-2018, 03:43 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 146
Posted By Findegil
I am not against using the arrangement...

I am not against using the arrangement ArcusCalion made, but I tried out an alternative given below. My goal was to keep more in line with the chronology. This goal I reached, but only by fragmenting...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 06-29-2018, 04:58 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 147
Posted By Findegil
DF-SL-01.5: Agreed. DF-SL-02.1: Agreed. ...

DF-SL-01.5: Agreed.

DF-SL-02.1: Agreed.

DF-SL-02.2: If we take your editing we jump backward and forward, as we tell in the Beregond addition about the fleeing orcs, than we jump back to the...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 06-28-2018, 04:00 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 147
Posted By Findegil
DF-SL-01.4, DF-SL-01.5 & DF-SL-05: I agree that...

DF-SL-01.4, DF-SL-01.5 & DF-SL-05: I agree that the placement of DF-SL-05 does fit Appendix A but not so much our setting. I would therefore propose the following changes:

DF-SL-02.2 to DF-SL-02.6...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 06-27-2018, 10:31 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 107
Posted By Findegil
The chapter seems straightforward. I have not...

The chapter seems straightforward. I have not much comment on:
HE-SL-09 & HE-SL-10: I think we should mix these additions a bit more. Respectfully
Findegil
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 06-26-2018, 12:26 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 142
Posted By Findegil
RE-SL-07b: I don't think it is the same. Cirion...

RE-SL-07b: I don't think it is the same. Cirion first tries to get help from the peoples still lingering in the lower vales of Anduin, but they are few and reluctant to help. than ha sends for help...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 06-26-2018, 10:23 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 142
Posted By Findegil
A good chapter. To everything I do not comment I...

A good chapter. To everything I do not comment I agree.

RE-SL-07 to RE-SL-10: I think the main part of these adition has to come later. It is told that: the messengers of Cirion ‘ would have to go...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 06-26-2018, 10:23 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 169
Posted By Findegil
FY-HL-09: If we really need The Stewards later...

FY-HL-09: If we really need The Stewards later The Wachtful Peace might be an alternative. But let us wait for the later chapter before the decision.

Respectfully
Findegil
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 06-25-2018, 11:41 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 169
Posted By Findegil
FY-HL-09: Well if it does not fit to The Legend...

FY-HL-09: Well if it does not fit to The Legend of Amroth and Nimrodel nor to The Ride of Eorl then we must separate it as a full chapter of its own. And I don’t think that these chapters become too...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 06-24-2018, 04:13 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 169
Posted By Findegil
AN-SL-01: I think we should place this...

AN-SL-01: I think we should place this differently. I agree that it should be told here as a kind expansion of the Legend of Amroth and Nimrodel but especially if we follow with the earlier movement...
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