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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 12-22-2004, 04:11 PM
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Posted By Aiwendil
RD-EX-40 I just realized that in my haste...

RD-EX-40

I just realized that in my haste I've been continually misreading this:



It is not grammatic incorrect. However, I would still use my version. This version ("did we have...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 12-21-2004, 07:19 PM
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Posted By Aiwendil
About chapters: this is a general question and...

About chapters: this is a general question and not one that need be answered here.

The main headings at least seem all right to me. But some of the proposed subheadings will be quite long and...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 12-20-2004, 04:31 PM
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Posted By Aiwendil
RD-EX-21 Findegil wrote: The "final...

RD-EX-21

Findegil wrote:


The "final tragedy" of the Narn is the death of Turin and Nienor. This, at any rate, is the way Tolkien divided things up in every post-LT re-telling.



I can...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 12-19-2004, 08:36 PM
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Posted By Aiwendil
And another thing . . . I wonder about using...

And another thing . . .

I wonder about using this:



If I remember correctly, this is in TN a description of the gold after it has been fashioned by the Dwarves. It might be a suitable...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 12-19-2004, 08:30 PM
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Posted By Aiwendil
Another point I just noticed: And...

Another point I just noticed:



And RD-EX-24:



In TN there has just been a battle in Thingol's halls, and the gold is literally moistened with blood. Here it looks like we are changing...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 12-19-2004, 06:22 PM
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Posted By Aiwendil
RD-SL-10 I was under the impression...

RD-SL-10



I was under the impression that we were going to be as ambiguous as possible about the outlaws' fate - even to the point of allowing the possibility that they fell into quarrels and...
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 12-19-2004, 03:43 PM
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Views: 11,892
Posted By Aiwendil
RD-SL-10 I would simply delete this...

RD-SL-10



I would simply delete this part, thus:



RD-EX-21
Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum 12-18-2004, 03:13 PM
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Views: 11,892
Posted By Aiwendil
RD-SL-10 Should be "their". If...

RD-SL-10


Should be "their".



If our idea is to make the ultimate fate of the outlaws ambiguous, then this doesn't work, as it asserts that they did in fact survive.

RD-EX-21
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