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Re: New Outline
Nice outline; and I see what is intended.
However >I< think that the legendarium of the fathers of men should include the 3 main tales of men in the second book, not the first. Other than that it seems perfectly fine.
Other opinions?
</p>Edited by: <A HREF=http://www.barrowdowns.com/cgi-bin/ultimatebb.cgi?ubb=get_profile&u=00000133>Saulotus </A> at: 1/21/01 11:47:54 am
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