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Old 07-21-2003, 07:53 AM   #4
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Originally posted by antoine2
it s used in Transition part, see FG-T-12.
Ok, I will have to review that.

The change FG-TG-03.5, would be inserted here:
From paragraph 20:

of the guard without ceasing he was told, that was held there in arms and likewise at certain low places in the encircling mountains, and how watchers dwelt ever vigilant on the highest peaks of that range beside builded beacons ready for the fire; for never did that folk cease to look for an onslaught of the Orcs {did their stronghold become known.} [and no spy or creature out of Angband could come there because of the vigilance of the eagles, and Morgoth was thwarted in the fulfillment of his designs.]
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