The revision looks good. Sorry I did not propose one myself, but brain power was waning.
Yours is just right.
I hope to read through all of 3 in this way.
Over the next few days or so. I did not really go back to our source text for sections 1 and 2 because in 1 the changes are rare and in 2 I think the entire text was the proposed changes, but for pt. 3 there are a lot of sections not listed here, that are in our composite ource text.
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The dwindling Men of the West would often sit up late into the night exchanging lore & wisdom such as they still possessed that they should not fall back into the mean estate of those who never knew or indeed rebelled against the Light.
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