Just a try!
Ai Ilúvatar! Lindananyë ana i eleni!
You speak quiet words close to my heart!
What love I have, I give to Thee!
Take my brash thoughts, turn them into wisdom!
Guide me! Keep me safe from those who would do wrong to me!
1st line says in Quenya (at least my first real stab at it): Ah/Oh, Ilúvatar (God)! I sing towards the stars!
Comments? I would like to know what you all think...
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Laita Ilúvatar!
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Laita Ilúvatar!
"But what?" said Gandalf. "Only one but will I allow tonight."
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