Okay... it's around dusk (which to my warped mind is late afternoon. Very late! [img]smilies/wink.gif[/img] Does that work for everyone? I just initally wrote the capture of Toby to take place in the dark. I have since changed it to daylight.
Yes, that sounds good regarding their hearing the sounds of battle just as they finish questioning Toby. But, I would think Toby was nabbed before dark. On the other hand, if my post works better the way it was before, let me know & I can change it back. I seem to be muddying the waters when I was actually trying to clear them.
Ooh, Yikes! Nerindel & Hilde- Elora is sending orcs after us! Do we fight or make a run for it into Imladris? Or both?
<font size=1 color=339966>[ 11:35 AM January 13, 2004: Message edited by: Ealasaide ]
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