Maika,
Please accept my most sincere apologies for the harsh tone of my comments on your outline. I was just writing down some thoughts and apparently was too blunt in making sure I was understood. I am extremely sorry for offending you in any way.
Thank you very much for the clarification of the rationale behind the events. I assumed that since so much was happening, a correspondingly long amount of time would be needed. I take it the "Acts" in Part I stand (roughly) for days?
Everything really looks terrific. I'm getting very excited to be finally on our way - especially once my math test is over!
Pio: I guess you didn't see that I had edited in my character's last name - he is now "Calnal Dontal." Thanks!
Most sincerely,
Nuranar
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