All looks good to me.
I also would prefer not to use 1st person if possible, for fear of the pyschological repercusions. [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img]
Does anyone plan to bring up the infamous red stone, or should we ignore it's existance? I'm trying to weed out irrelevant stuff in my mind here...letters...rocks...Myrtle...hmmm....
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