Excellent, but may I just add 'long lost' in front of cave; having a war between the entire mountain of dwarves and...five or six elves (and humans? Do we have huma characters? Im sure we can.). Striking me as not such a good plan for the whole life deal.
If everyone approves of that plot then...
We have a plot.
We have original characters.
We have a non magical object.
We have a quest.
...and we do not have a name.
Anyone? Maybe just 'Silvandl' or 'The Quest For (The?) Silvandl' ?
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