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Brinniel · 03-29-2003, 05:06 PM

Lyra Greenleaf - Your character sounds fine. But if he lived in Lorien at the time of the War of the Ring, he needs to be much older (look at the time the story is set).

Horse-Maiden of the Shire- I'm afraid your character Elwing doesn't seem very realistic or believable to me. Perhaps you could try writing a bio for a character other than a hobbit.

VanimaEdhel- Kalir sounds great! It'll be interesting to see his reaction when he first meets the elves.

03-29-2003, 05:06 PM	#13
Brinniel Reflection of Darkness Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: Polishing the stars. Well, somebody has to do it; they're looking a little bit dull. Posts: 2,983	Lyra Greenleaf - Your character sounds fine. But if he lived in Lorien at the time of the War of the Ring, he needs to be much older (look at the time the story is set). Horse-Maiden of the Shire- I'm afraid your character Elwing doesn't seem very realistic or believable to me. Perhaps you could try writing a bio for a character other than a hobbit. VanimaEdhel- Kalir sounds great! It'll be interesting to see his reaction when he first meets the elves. __________________ Nolite te bastardes carborundorum