maikafanawen: Yes, change that thing about red hair. Blond is preferable, and usually the color of the mirkwood elves.
astarielle: As pio mentioned, elves in middle - earth (particularly mirkwood elves) do not practice magic or have magic weapons. Also, does you character exibit any like or dislike for populated places such as inns? Is she the solitary type, or the sociable. Aside from those points, it was a good description.
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