lol mad? Of course I'm mad I'm infuriated [img]smilies/wink.gif[/img] ! Shieldmaiden that was exactly the kind of response I was hoping for. Thank you for being honest and frank. I wasn't sure which one was which one was which
I will change the names immediately. As for working gurthin in, I am not sure how to do it. I thought of portraying him as a traitor who had allowed the duneldlenders to attack, (slacking off on guard duties, being bribed etc.) but I didn't put it in for various reasons (length being one). I would love to hear any suggestions you might have on the subject.
Thank you again!
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