Awesome posts!
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Ceros’ eyes widened as the opening front doors revealed a dark hall in front of them. The chill from the hall reached right down into his heart .... his voice ricocheted off the icy walls
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This is good for the first introduction and categorization of our characters to their places, but we're not supposed to be in the Tower. Let's focus the rest of the time at the machinery (for the females) and army training (for the males).
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it is nearing the height of the sun and we were lucky we weren’t scorched trying to get them here
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Half-orcs are not affected by the sun. Goblins are, but half-orcs are not.
Tinuviel: I'm curious, are you English? [img]smilies/wink.gif[/img]
We've two days until our departure from Amon Lanc.
-Maikafanawen