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Nurumaiel · 09-24-2003, 05:43 PM

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I apologize; it totally slipped my mind that the guards had not arrived yet. What I think would work is if, when the post where they arrive is finished, I cut the post I just finished in half and move the second half, where Addruran brags about his important papers, to a place after that. I wrote that section thinking the guards had already arrived, and I mentioned how one of the men (the spy), asked him a question about the papers he (Addruran) was talking about.

EDIT: Actually, I take it back. If I just edit out the part of the 'young man' asking Addruran about the note, I could have the pleasure of doing another post. [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img] I absolutely love seeing Addruran act this way.
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[ September 24, 2003: Message edited by: Nurumaiel ]

09-24-2003, 05:43 PM	#254
Nurumaiel Vice of Twilight Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: on a mountain Posts: 1,121	Child I apologize; it totally slipped my mind that the guards had not arrived yet. What I think would work is if, when the post where they arrive is finished, I cut the post I just finished in half and move the second half, where Addruran brags about his important papers, to a place after that. I wrote that section thinking the guards had already arrived, and I mentioned how one of the men (the spy), asked him a question about the papers he (Addruran) was talking about. EDIT: Actually, I take it back. If I just edit out the part of the 'young man' asking Addruran about the note, I could have the pleasure of doing another post. [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img] I absolutely love seeing Addruran act this way. [img]smilies/evil.gif[/img] [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img] [ September 24, 2003: Message edited by: Nurumaiel ] __________________ In the fury of the moment I can see the Master's hand in every leaf that trembles, in every grain of sand.