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Old 06-01-2003, 08:04 PM   #16
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The children crept out one by one. Each one looked at Georeliela with sleep in their eyes.. and pain and exhausted ness. Lara gave a worried smile almost to say… yes we are free but what next?

Finally all the children were out. The cave was slowly crumbling.. only slightly, it was almost like a drizzle of sand. Georeliela panicked, they needed to get out. Georeliela went out first then Lara then others. There were only five people left. As she watched the people climbing out the cave she heard heavy breathing behind her and warm breath against her neck. She turned around and gave out a shriek and the huge monster scowled and started to snap at her. His huge teeth were ready to bit and the venom ready to paralyse. Georeliela hit the monster and panicked. The great monster started walk towards her wanting to bite her but he was walking in the direction of the drop his intention must have been to push her of the cliff. She hit him and swung around. Now she had him to drop of the cliff but she was so scared she could not breath and she was shacking and her heart was beating like the drummers role. She had to try and stay away from his mouth for he might bite, and the deadly venom penetrate through out her body. She bit his one arm and he screeched, and fell to the ground.

Georeliela swung around to see what was happening with all the people. Before she could say anything she saw the cave collapsing. “No!” Lara screeched. “How many were left?” Georeliela said panic stricken. “Three” Lara aid with tears running down her face. Georeliela turned around not wanting the others to see her tears. But before she had a chance to sob she spotted Pirk walking down the road as she looked down the cliff. Pirk looked up the cliff and screamed “they have escaped”

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