DC, your dream state is consistent... but maybe it would have been better if you had written more of Morno’s ordeal while he was being tortured. Perhaps inserted more “nasties” that Rudhchcamion and Co. Would be meeting.
Anyways, as it is... why not just write some more, but post Tinuiel in. Have her “mingle” with you’re character. She would try to turn you back to good. I really think she’d make you into an ally, being loyal to Thranduil and being very compassionate... then you could like “try” to make amends and help out the elves.
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