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piosenniel · 12-14-2002, 05:22 PM

Sharon

Just posted a scene between Gamba and Pio

Moved your confrontation save below that one. (or go ahead and move mine if you need to)

Pat, the writer agrees - Pio was rash, cannot say what or if she will offer any rationalization for her actions. Hit me with her indignation and anger, and let's see how Pio responds. (This would be so much easier if Pio were a perfect super-hero character! she would never do anything wrong.)

Another thought - here is an alternative - I'll go back and take out that scene and you can rewrite it if you wish. perhaps that would be simpler.

[ December 14, 2002: Message edited by: piosenniel ]

12-14-2002, 05:22 PM	#937
piosenniel Desultory Dwimmerlaik Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Pickin' flowers with Bill the Cat..... Posts: 7,779	Sharon Just posted a scene between Gamba and Pio Moved your confrontation save below that one. (or go ahead and move mine if you need to) Pat, the writer agrees - Pio was rash, cannot say what or if she will offer any rationalization for her actions. Hit me with her indignation and anger, and let's see how Pio responds. (This would be so much easier if Pio were a perfect super-hero character! she would never do anything wrong.) Another thought - here is an alternative - I'll go back and take out that scene and you can rewrite it if you wish. perhaps that would be simpler. [ December 14, 2002: Message edited by: piosenniel ] __________________ Eldest, that’s what I am . . . I knew the dark under the stars when it was fearless - before the Dark Lord came from Outside.