[Katt b]

A fairly small and delicate young woman approaches the Inn looking hoplessly lost she glances up at the sign and decides to enter.The doors swing open and she cringes the smell of smoke is strong in the air."Umm Excuse me can anyone tell me where I am, I seem to be quite lost?"

The small girl? walks up to the bartender "Excuse me but could you tell me where I am"As she reaches up to brush her hair away from her face you can see she is not a girl but an elven girl.
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Please note I have edited your posts and put them together.

You need to read the Red Book of Westmarch for the rules for posting in the Shire (It is the first topic in the Shire Forum)

Basic rule is: Every post must be a minimum 2 paragraphs long with each paragraph 2 sentences minimum.

Try to be as descriptive as you can in your post - tell us what your character looks like, is doing, thinking, etc - how she sees the world around her. Be careful when using dialog that it doesn't encourage chatty posts. Try to keep your language and ideas fairly Tolkien centered, and don't let too much modern wording creep in.

~~ Piosenniel, Shire Moderator

[ May 11, 2003: Message edited by: piosenniel ]