Thanks Littleman, I think that the characters weakness will either be in his sword - he saw the sword in a vision and then crafted it himself (pride) - or will be his own name. The name Envinyatalis means sweet healer or sweet renewer. He has a conflicting personallity, a warrior and a healer (which I have yet to develop)- mercy and justice conflicts at times.
It seems that he is going to be the most difficult character for me to write.
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I think The Jewel of Battle and The Wolf's Claw are the two best and least derivative titles amongst your choices.
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Thanks. We were trying to come up with somethings that were relevent to the story, but without giving the end away.
PS. I think that "Upon Tirion's Shore" would be a great chapter heading though! [img]smilies/smile.gif[/img] Maybe the Last Chapter.
[ June 13, 2002: Message edited by: Joy ]