Devon is safely back on the right ship (thanks to Marx - nice guy, that) and in Mr. Sedal's capable hands. (That last part is implied - I spoke only through Calnan and he's still on the
Pora Diy.)
I hope my interpretation of both Meri and Avershire is passably on the mark, Maika. I didn't do much with Meri, but I did want to take the action a little further than your last post. If you want to replace anything - like Avershire's call for surrender, because I'm unsure about it - just let me know.
I want to work out Calnan's thoughts in another post after the battle and corsair-sinking, so I hope there'll be an opportunity before the next fight. Especially I want to express his thoughts about the Meri situation (I know what he'll be thinking right now) but I want to work in whatever happens later with her and Avershire.
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Avershire yelling at her about the difference between themselves and the pirates having to do with their looking out for one another
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I take it Avershire's going to find out about what she did about Devon? If so, please don't have Calnan tell him - at least not as a tattletale. I think he's a bit more gentlemanly than that.
Hey now,
Himaran, you're not the only one capable of using satire.
I knew that you were teasing, so I responded in kind. And I'd love to play out that grudge. Looks like Calnan may be making personal enemies on both sides!