Yay! Glad you like it. Na, no rough draft this time - but it *only* took me 3 or 4 hours! Long time, but it seemed to go so fast...
Oh, way cool idea! Especially since it just kinda happened - I mean not planning the antagonism there at all. Terrific! Meri's cool, but she does need taken down a little bit. And it sounds like a lot of fun to write. Except I don't know he'd say because that's what
she'd do - her behavior kinda illustrated the opposite to him - but because that's what
allies (or something like that) do. And that'd fit in with your earlier comment, if I understand it right.
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the difference between themselves and the pirates having to do with their looking out for one another
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Allies look out for each other - a common goal, themes of holding something together, have to start with each other, et cetera. All told, sounds terrific!
Oh, I see that you've wrapped up the
Pora Diy. Very good - I don't think I could've envisioned come up with that depth to the scene. Good show! Shall I wait for another poster before I resume with Calnan? Any hints on the direction to take (literally with the ship, or figuratively with the mood on board), or shall I just focus on him?