I personally didn't want to dwell on the fields too much. I hope it's ok what I did, if not, I can always edit/delete. I'll write a much longer post soon, but school starts again soon and I need to write some papers. I'm thinking I'll get one up tomorrow.
Also, Aylwen, Annunfuin is a male human, I was confused with:
by the Elf's sudden change
"Cartil," Annunfuin began, but her voice stopped
See you in the posts
~Kryss