Thanx. I do like to share my writings, but hate to show them when they are incomplete. For some time in school I was working on the first chapter for my story and every one wanted to read it. The problem is, with out the ending ( a big plot twist) it was meaningless, and lead up to nothing. There was noything to keep them itrested or to think about untill I finished that part. Now I have gone over it about 8 times ( it must be perfect) and found more ways to draw people into it. I think that the first chapter, or even paragraph of a book is very important. It must draw readers in but not reveil too much so there is some sort of mystery involved. For fantasy, this is quite hard. Oh well enough of my ramblings, and thanx again starbreeze.
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