Exampled would be appreciated. I have yet to really encounter what you speak of. The detail that bothers me is the the detail that lingers way too long on one item. For example, jake whyte spends close the three pages describing how the soldier got stabbed throught the groin with a spear( or something to that nature) more detail then I really needed to know! That is the type of description I do not want to read.
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Mes sana in corpec sano- (lt.) A sound mind in a sound body
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