[Lila Bramble]

((Just like to put in I'm from Mexico, not from Canada or the US!))

Well, in my opinion, if there is complete evil, there better be a darn well good reason for them to be pure evil. Either they were a great pure good that transformed evil (and a pure good that transforms to an evil they must be PURE evil, at least my religion says so) or they've been transformed from just a regular smoe driven by something VERY distrubting to pure evil, but its very difficult to explain who something bcame pure evil. After all, spirits are what gives the body life (blood is not life, plants are alive, but do they have blood? its the essence of the spirit. But that's just my own belifes) and the spirit must've been previosuly corrupted, but again, how?

These are Dark Lords. Dark Lords often have no origin: no family, no past, no childhood, nothing. All you have to write is: "The Dark Lord who strived on nothing but the will to conquer and corrupt the souls of other." And according to my belifes, it is impossible to live without a spirit, so soemthimng must've happened to the 'dark lord' to stir they're spirit to do such corrupt.

Or, as also in my belifes, it could've been one of the Greater Evil Spirit's mingions consuming a new body, entering it and spreading his evil and wrong intent from his previous generation of terror. (I think that there are a select few spirits that were not allowd back into the Haven (otherwords heaven) that re-incarinate continously and create the evergoing evil people)

So to make a simple and fresh 'bad guy', I made a sort of stuck-up and spoiled teenager who also happened to posses strong magic inherited from his ancestors, and abused his power to take control of the grea kingdoms and leading the world to fear, even though they did not even realise his young age. And this boy grew to a 'king' and as he grew more powerful with a growing reign, he became greedy and more abusive. There, a realstic villan!

Also, my writing tahcer read one page of my novel and said "You must be a fan of tolkien." Is that bad or good?