*claps* Very good, post, Orofaniel. Nothing needs changing, as Thrakmazh was used well, and in-character. Only one thing, but you don't need to change it, since I am simply a man who loves to nitpick. Thrakmazh is one-eyed, so he doesn't have 'eyes' per se. But, this is really irrelevant, since no one would notice on first glance. Again, good post, and a good discourse between all the captains.
Durelin, I'm with Fordim here, but I'd like to make a request. If possible, could thrakmazh and Urkrash accompany that force, leading the orcs that go with Herding's Southrons? I have a *ahem* date with some elves and a very sharp knife, so to speak...
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Hearing our fate-appointed power sublime/Fixed by the eternal law.
For old our office, and our fame,"
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