"It's all flowers and butterflies with her..."
Sounds reasonably unreasonable to me! And quite realistic. Multiple-voiced ricocheting echoes of "You heartless cad, how could you...?"
Immy, I like the dream! Nicely done, and very Gwyllish! Skipping amid the flowers...
Now for one of those annoying details-- and entirely my fault. I am afraid that I've got Nimrodel's hair color wrong... I keep saying "shadowy", a la Luthien, but she was Silvan, and their hair is gold. "As sun upon the golden boughs of Lorien the fair." Get a clue, Helen, it's *right there* in the song...
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...down to the water to see the elves dance and sing upon the midsummer's eve.
Last edited by mark12_30; 10-18-2004 at 07:57 PM.
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