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Novnarwen: would you like me to edit. It would be tricky as I have used Tarkan quite alot in my answers: it seemed fitting as they would work together. Zamara does not honestly think Tarkan is a bad person, she would not act on this, but it is just in her nature that she is very observant. If you feel very strongly though, I will edit.
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Amanaduial- You don't need to edit anything.

Just a thought however... Even though Zamara is observant, there has been nothing to observe just yet, from Tarkan I mean. I plan to make him anonymous in the beginning, where he doesn't openly express his feelings; certainly not his fondness of the Princess. I hope too, to let the priests have a friendly tone. They don't have to be the best friends, but Tarkan will at least not express any 'nastiness' towards the priestess. I imagine it being some kind of false friendliness, at least that is how Tarkan is going to approach this matter.. If you want, we can discuss this further, and closer, via PM.
I will try to have a post up as soon as possible! The Game is looking great already!
Cheers,
Nova
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