Back again.
Boromir88 - I've added a bit of description to my earlier post (#20) to try and lead into your description in the save. Here is what I put:
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The last to be rescued had been Rory. The young lad had been half drowned, until Bingo had managed to drag him over to the tree stump, and others had come to guide him to the shore.
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Please let me know if I should edit this in any way, after you finish filling in that save. Anything you want me to say is fine: I just thought we might want to include Rory in the descriptive lead-in I put up.
Meanwhile, I am going back now to fill in
my save that comes right before yours.
Cami