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Okay, here's the deal. I moved my post so that Kitanna's is before mine. I think this makes sense since Kitanna does mention how Sondo and Reggie caught some fish.
However, Kitanna, it would have already started to drizzle at the end of your post. Not pour, just chilly, wet drizzling. If you could change that then I think everything would be correct, chronologically and otherwise.
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