01-23-2005, 12:40 PM
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Laconic Loreman
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: USA
Posts: 7,521
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Also, Boromir, this is really minor, but would you mind taking out the line where Sondo says "Who's with me?" He'd be more likely just to expect them all to listen... If you want, though, Sondo could give Rory some kind of pointed look, something more 'personal' between the two.
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Sure thing  .
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