Himaran - nice bio, interesting character. He'll add a lot of tension to the situation. However, few questions:
What influenced your character to carry a sword and not a bow against his national and racial opinions? He seems pretty proud to be a Numenorean otherwise.
Why would he be with us if he's not one of the Faithful and doesn't even like us? What has prevented him from giving us away, because we're in hiding? Why would we trust him? Or are we going to take him with us against our will?
He seems a little young to be deferring marriage. Perhaps he's a little older? Or he has some other good reason to be thinking of marriage early?
Just questions
Sophia
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The seasons fall like silver swords, the years rush ever onward; and soon I sail, to leave this world, these lands where I have wander'd. O Elbereth! O Queen who dwells beyond the Western Seas, spare me yet a little time 'ere white ships come for me!
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