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			Greetings to all [esp Antoine and Pio],
 I have never spent anytime considering the Narn issue, so I will pass over it.  The Lay however I would like to cast a couple of things into the hat.
 
 I would first off suggest a parallel text for the Beren & Luthien Chapter, as far as possible.
 
 Leaving space in either column when there is no parallel material.
 
 This preserves both sources and allows the reader to move back and forth w/ out missing either.
 
 Examples of this can be found most readily in 'parallel gospels' and such. I imagine also one sees this in collegiate circles for many ancient texts w/ many variants.
 
 Anyway I feel it is far and above the best way.
 
 Option 2 in my world of preferences is 'C' add in material as it fits and seems not to distract from the flow of the story. CJRT did it brilliantly w/ the finrod vs. sauron scene.
 
 - as always these days,
 
 good luck!
 
				__________________   The dwindling Men of the West would often sit up late into the  night exchanging  lore & wisdom  such  as they still possessed that they should not fall back into the mean estate of those who never knew or  indeed  rebelled against the Light.      |