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Originally Posted by the guy who be short
It was a shame, but I didn't get to use some of the deaths I'd thought out. One I remember particularly vividly is the baker's death (Celuien, I think it was).
Basically, the villages would rush in to the bakery and find nobody there. There would be a short panic - but then they'd find a note from Celuien saying she was out for a while, enjoy the pies.
So they'd eat all these pies they found on her table and wonder where she got the pork from. Until, of course, she didn't come back...
I wanted the make a little joke about how "the fact that Celuien would live on inside them wasn't comforting."
Oh well. I really wanted to use that death.
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Now that would have been quite a scene. All of the scenes you wrote were great.
Actually, I think Evisse was the village baker. I liked to sit behind my loom and weave fabric.
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