Great post,
Kath! 
Hate to bother you with this, but we're all following a general agreement to
italicize the
anakronisms. Folks, is that too much of a bother, or are we okay with it?
One correction, and sorry if my description was poor on this point: the ATM doesn't float in mid-air, it has merely risen from below the surface of the platform, and now stands at floor level, extending to head-height.
That's all for modifications.
I like the idea that one of the Offending Party is actually brand new to Mordor. We could have fun with that.
One more post to follow, perhaps almost immediately, to whet your appetite for what's coming...