Thread: one thing to change them all
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Old 12-21-2005, 04:49 PM   #3
Bergil
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Bergil has just left Hobbiton.
I would remove either
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..and his shadow stretched out like two vast wings
or
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... and his wings were spread from wall to wall
clears things up a bit.
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