I've played two games of WWJ. One was the village of the silent, the other the village of the last-days' insanity...
In the end, both were good fun.
Thank's Sleepy for your mod-job. Well done indeed - albeit those couple of strange problems on the way. But you didn't let them interfere with the game too much and to distract us players. Good work by you there!
As with the storyline and writing. Thinlómien told me (thought she knew), that you are not a native English-speaker. To that end you did very well in your writing - and I kind of agree with Jenny's thoughts about you getting better all the time.
The end scene might have had some clichées in it, and partially it could be seen as somewhat bombastic. But there were nice ideas too, and knitting the "hints" to a stortyline was well done anyway - even though one kind of guessed the meaning of those red marks beforehand and so there were not a special surprise-element in it... Well done!