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Constructive criticism on my writing would be appreciated!
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C'EST NULL! BAH!... You are the worst thing to happen to the act of writing since the Marquess of Queensberry!
Just joking dear, it was wonderfully done. At moments when it seemed there might be a plot fall, you swooped in with a twist and clue. To write is a great thing, most people just make words... Or are forced to droll their life away with thesis papers.
the only thing that I might advize is a clearer means of ending of sorts, for further games contruction and passing of the Mod staff... But that is just my opinion, and it is your work to how you deem it. Anyways, it was wonderfully written and proved most excellent an entertainment whilst in the thesis paper pit.
Hope to see more from you my dear!
...Even if you decided to render my legs useless for a second time in my life...
~ Aesthete