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I'm fine with it. Only now I'm debating whether or not Athwen knows that your character is usually someone short tempered and she shrugs off his rather abrupt snappishness, or if she didn't know him well enough and is either hurt of entirely confused. I hate writing about hurt little females and I certainly don't want her pouting, so we'll see. . .
I am sorry you are sick, Naria. That's really too bad. Hope you start getting better soon!
-- Folwren
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