Valier, you may want to consider taking your character directly up the hill with Sythric. Since we're pretty much past writing about hte first shock of the attack, it might be more beneficial for you to just start where we are - have Vaenosa have warded off a few Easterlings and then gallop up towards the top of the hill and there kill her fill of men.
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Athwen killed one man, but she won't be killing any more.
-- Folwren
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