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Nogrod · 04-28-2006, 05:28 PM

Tevildo: I made some changes to the last paragrah of your post - just changing the succession of events - so now Dorran first gives the potion, Sythric spits it out and then drinks it after Dorran's explanation... If it's ok., no need to comment - if there is, just tell me.

+ I used Dorran a bit. Just tell me if that is right or not.

+ If you would like to continue with the thoughts of Dorran, you could probably use this same SAVE as a place for it (I left there intentionally the note by Sythric for "the first time to meet the easterlings" - so if you want to go forwards from that, just go)

PS. Thanks Pio!

PS2. So, the SAVE filled...

04-28-2006, 05:28 PM	#4
Nogrod Flame of the Ainulindalë Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Wearing rat's coat, crowskin, crossed staves in a field behaving as the wind behaves Posts: 9,308	Tevildo: I made some changes to the last paragrah of your post - just changing the succession of events - so now Dorran first gives the potion, Sythric spits it out and then drinks it after Dorran's explanation... If it's ok., no need to comment - if there is, just tell me. + I used Dorran a bit. Just tell me if that is right or not. + If you would like to continue with the thoughts of Dorran, you could probably use this same SAVE as a place for it (I left there intentionally the note by Sythric for "the first time to meet the easterlings" - so if you want to go forwards from that, just go) PS. Thanks Pio! PS2. So, the SAVE filled... __________________ Upon the hearth the fire is red Beneath the roof there is a bed; But not yet weary are our feet... Last edited by Nogrod; 04-28-2006 at 05:37 PM.