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Originally Posted by Arry
But you know . . . this would be easier if you could just approach your post from Sythric's point of view and then let me figure out how Brand would respond from how Sythric presents himself and what he says.
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Surely. That's what I was going to do. But it would be natural to add one or two sentences like: "Brand looked towards him
reservedly, but
seemed to agree the company" - or whatever... You see: it would be nice knowing just those italicized points. Sorry. I'm just a bit nervous after our last encounter at the nightcamp, when I kind of overdid it - and got you upset by that. Just wanted to be sure...
Don't worry. I'll be careful this time.