I see the thread is still closed, but as I have now written the post, I will put it here below (I will be away for three days from tomorrow).
So
Arry / Pio: if you put it into the thread, you should see, whether it would be better placed before Undómë's post (#385), as it ends in the situation where Leod rushes to see for Brand... that is, before things happening in Undómë's post.
PS. It's a bit grim one in the end, but Sythric might as well be wrong with his analysis of the situation: you know it, that when you are very ill, you tend to look at things more gloomily than as when you are perfectly alright...
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POST PLACED ON GAME ~*~ PIO
post removed from here... - Nogrod