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Seems like Hama's post needs to be moved to an earlier place in the thread. Like between posts 3 & 4, I think.
Hama:
“Bloody hell Haleth!” needs to be changed to "Blood and swords, Haleth!"
... ready to take on the whole damn Mordor army all by ourselves!” The expletive here may simply be removed.
The rest of it is just fine.
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