I imagine I'll be in a small minority when I comment that I didn't really like this at all.
I could have just put up with it if it had been in the book, but it felt like an added, gratuitous feelgood moment. Like the excruciating bedroom scene with everyone laughing and crying and kissing and cuddling.
(Merry comes in.)
Frodo: Merryyyy!!!
(Gandalf comes in.)
Frodo: Gandalfff!!!
(Legolas comes in.)
Frodo: Legolas!!!!!
(Eomer comes in.)
Frodo: Er...who are you?
(Beregond, Imrahil, Glorfindel and Halbarad saunter in.)
Frodo: And who in Arda are you?
Chorus of cut characters: We will have our vengeance...hack, slash, hack...
Anyway, yup, I didn't like the bowing; it seemed superfluous, anachronistic, pseudo-democratic. Bad fanfic.
EDIT: Oh and welcome to the Downs deathscar.
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